Discuss the Story
Author: Anonymous
Comment: I like.
Author: Amber Smith
Comment: I definitely think we should focus on one of the children....maybe tell the story from that adults perspective looking back to his/her childhood? Or maybe each chapter could be one child's story.... or from the perspective of someone in the town that knew them ( the gardener?).....
Author: Robert Easley
Comment: Agreed
Author: Peter Pearson
Comment: "I dive into a story the way I dive into the sea, prepared to splash about and make merry." -E.B. White. In writing, there tend to be the planners and the plungers. I say we plunge. In the non-plumbing sense. The story will choose its own direction.
Author: kingofpants
Comment: Old type writer factory: http://homepage.mac.com/sljohnson/typewriter/oliver/oliver-history-a.html
Author: kingofpants
Comment: So where do we want this story to go? I mean it's starting to sound like a children's book or it could this could just be laying the groundwork for a very different story. Should we start to focus on one of the children?